original kindness quote; is this dumb?

in english we were supposed to come up with quotes out of certain categorys. I chose the category kindness. This is my quote;

good intentions don't always benefit you right away; but in the long run the act of being kind grants a life time full of friends and oppurtunitys.

does that sound dumb? i want something in place of oppurtunitys but couldn't think of anything. Does this quote make sence?

Comments

  • I think your quote is really good , just correct the word opportunities an your set.

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  • very genuine and a few of them i do myself while im havin a blond 2d I asked my buddy the different day who exchange into older her or her older brother i meant to ask how previous he exchange into. lol

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